It was a dark and stormy night, a simple poem.

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By tonymead60


This is a poem based on the silly rhyme we used to say when I was a kid, and it made me think of what a dark and stormy night, could mean to many different people. It can be exhilarating or frightening, or just keep you awake as the wind blows.

It was a dark and stormy night, three old men sat around a fire, one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night, three lonely wives sat huddled around the fire, one said to the others, ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night, three fishermen fought for their lives against a ferocious sea, and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night three fat Bishops held a banquet for their friends to celebrate Christmas and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night by the side of a frozen dessert road three children were dying of hunger, and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night and three young men sniffed their first cocaine, and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night, and three politicians patted themselves on the back and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night three soldiers lay dying for a cause they didn’t understand and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night three bankers sat and laughed at the world that had made them so rich for their failure and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night three rich kids threw a tantrum for more, more, more, and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night, and three wise men began to follow a star and as they rode, one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus:

It was a dark and stormy night three shepherds stood on a hillside and one said to the others ‘tell us a tale’ and the tale ran thus…

It was a dark and stormy night, outside a city wall, three men hung from crosses…

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stessily profile image

stessily Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Tony, Wow! All walks of life are presented here, and you saved the most powerful encounters for the end!

I love the sound of the wind at night, but it's always been safe for me. I've never been in a hurricane. A tornado has struck nearby, but not near enough to affect me. So that's why I love the sound of the wind, especially when it's accompanied by the sound of the ocean.

Great poem wonderfully and effectively presented.

All the votes.

Kind regards from your computerless fan, Stessily

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tonymead60 Hub Author 4 months ago

HI Stessily

still no computer? It must be driving you nuts!

The poem was one of those things that you wake in the middle of the night and it is burning your mind. It could have a million more verses, obviously it goes on and on. I was not sure as to whether or not to publish it because it is a bit odd; but in a way that is why I did pulish.

Nice to ehar from you again, I don't know when you will read this without your computer, but there is another cooking adventure with Fabio out. crunchy chicken if you have time.

all the best my friend. Tony

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stessily Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Tony, I'm not finding a crunchy chicken recipe in your repertoire! So I visited "Deck of Cards", which caught my attention. Could you include the link to crunchy chicken so I may read it on my next visit? Thank you!

Stessily

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tonymead60 Hub Author 4 months ago

http://tonymead60.hubpages.com/_16a9dgmegm0bq/hub/

Hi stessily, does this mean that your computer is back running?

cheers tony

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stessily Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Tony, Alas and alack! My faithful computer could not reasonably be resuscitated, so I parcelled it to happy homes: monitor to my friends' stepson so he could have his own sleek TV; tower, keyboard, etc., for repair and then resale in a nice shop; I kept the hard drive. I'm still pondering its successor. Fingers and toes crossed for the best decision.

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tonymead60 Hub Author 3 months ago

HI

there is such a bewildering array of choices, I usually go on line to Dell. If you know more or less what you need in the way of RAM and such like it's nice to sort of build your own; otherwise it is always a bit of a compromise. I'm sure you'll make the right decision.

best wishes

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Shalini Kagal Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

That was powerful! There was a contest run last year I think by a hubber - to complete the opening line, 'It was a dark and stormy night...' You'd have won hands down!

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tonymead60 Hub Author 3 months ago

many thanks for your comment and visit to my site, it was just a thought I had onan early morning visit to the wc. Funny how your mind can wander at times, and where the inspiration comes from.

take care

Tony

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Angie Jardine Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Ayup, Tony ... what a clever twist on this old joke .

Extremely powerful ... respect!

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tonymead60 Hub Author 3 months ago

Angie, thank you for your visit and comment. You could add your own lines to this verse, and on and on it could go.

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kashmir56 Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi my friend, thanks for this very entertaining poem and the most powerful bit at the end .

Vote up !!!

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tonymead60 Hub Author 2 months ago

KAshmir56

thank you for reading, and voting, sometimes inspiration is just waiting for us.

tony

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Derdriu Level 8 Commenter 6 weeks ago

Tony, What a dramatic, haunting, philosophical "simple" story poem! In particular, I like the flow of the poem, in which each type of narrator flows into another. For example, three old men might be interested in a tale about three lonely wives, who might be interested in a tale about their missing fishermen husbands.

Thank you for sharing, voted up + all.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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tonymead60 Hub Author 6 weeks ago

Derdriu

Thank you for your votes and interest. I am overawed and appreciative of the amount of comments you have left over the past couple of days.

respectfully, Tony

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